Wednesday, 16 October 2013

Dredd vs The Avengers Essay

1 comment:

  1. Ollie.

    There are some very good parts to this essay where your point of view is both clear and supported by pertinent examples. However on occasion the formality and structure of your response lets you down.

    To improve you'll need some key vocabulary for release patterns as well as key stats on how many screens the film was available in 2D. I'd also recommend that you try and include Mark Kermode, many of your ideas mimic his BUT you need to credit him with the idea.

    You also need a conclusion as this ends somewhat abruptly. Take a look at Harry Abbott's effort.

    Argument 15/25
    Examples 13/25

    28/50 (two marks off a C)